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    Yes, I'm bored again, so I thought I'd pop in once more to annoy you people. So what am I doing with myself during my hiatus? Why, plugging PADS! into AltaVista translators, and translating them back to English. Let's see what the first chapter gets, eh? I might plug in the rest of the crapters too, depends.

    ******************** Pokemon: Protective place of Damned style! The venture talks of Darkbadge: 1st chapter: サイバネチィック, it was the day when ******************** that is hot directly. Grass everything immigrated to the area where the Pokemon our hero walked, in order to extract the majority from the very hot sun. As for トム especially seeking weak Pokemon, immense, in the field which was opened, you saw. As for him without weakening thing that one whose Pokeball is strong cannot be captured, you knew the complete well. As for トム 5 feet 9, it was attached to the gold appearance which it is sunburned fairly. The long beige trench coat where as for him the usual blue jeans have been attached was learned. There was a short black hair in him, the majority completely the eye of the fixed form nose and that brown the complete way agreed to that dark hair equally. Immediately after トム turns 16, before the week, that friend whom you retire as the trainer of Pokemon. He gave that Pokemon everything, but Pokeballs of the sky for the small-numbered nostalgic reason was maintained. The money of the training Pokemon and in order to make life fair yesterday, as for him with トムトム like the trainer where the majority is young those were given to the school which is stopped. But this purpose seems that is left for the present because of トム. He 1 single Pokemon or the badge did not possess with that. Everyone had known that it needs that you rival with the winner whom those badges 8 Tsuga Pokemon annual leagues, should take at least with the trainer of the elite on 4 for the area. Rivals and the winner who is supposed there with each other, in order to decide the 1st competitor for the title of Pokemaster was. The next point person takes the place before their elite 4 being strongest, their elite 4 is weakest strikes. As for the clear winner in the face of present Pokemaster, it can decide the new champion. Everyone had known, the name of that Pokemon of present Pokemaster. Spreads in the rumor which that, present Pokemaster' Dragonite, Murkrow, Ampharos, and Charizard which are the several of s Pokemon it was. But certainly, because it is true Pokemaster, another Pokemon must be greatly one. Because and evidence of the perplexity of 251st Pokemon was verified, the league champion having in 100, was secure. But perhaps トム you worried that little from now. Now, トム was worried about that that first Pokemon is obtained. The level topography, it continued トム in the route 46 which is ended. For the present, he looked at Rattata, Pidgey, and Oddish; But it was in order forces those and everything it does not fight excessively to capture. Being weakened, saw トム. " As for How me it which perhaps becomes weak? " It is not it can obtain new Pokemon,; He hired him himself. " I can' The fight that of t by your, otherwise that do not rely on me under any condition. I possibly-" How is possible?; That as for that thought the land floated and rose, met to that surface it was cut simultaneously suddenly. " Ow and " He groans, rises to that knee, rubs that surface. " As for What that? " Was; Exactly and, as for him to be the stone, other than being even excessively sharp, gray of the edge of the group leaf of the road where he stumbled became aware in the blue stone. Actually, as for that like the box it was the majority. トム went and looking at that closely was suddenly pulled in the shrub. " The could' of I wonderful what; Been of ve? " He hires him, himself that Pokedex which points to the shrub to that pulls and pulls out. " which is detected; " No Pokemon; As for Pokedex you said blankly. " Well and it' S gotta' " of Pokemon; Be; As for him that he rose to the bush, the ぶ and it was simultaneously. The group leaf was denser here. As for twig Tom' That him that method was made under the feet of s through the shrub, it stopped simultaneously. Exactly and, he inquired about the wailing which is sharp. He saw, looked at that tail which is stored under the foot bottom of that boots of Weedle. " Weedle and " of hairy insect Pokemon; Tom' You called s Pokedex. " It the head is sharp as a weapon vis-a-vis the aggressor, the stinger of poisonous is used. In addition as for that from the substance which is stickiness of the opposite person the time threatened. " It spits; トム to move that feet from Weedle separated, to that " Hey and I' M being regrettable, the small person, " Whether body thoughtlessness; The useless る way to call トム, slow Weedle' The walking of the tail of s, with Pokemon which is damaged it moves because of the る. Suddenly, as for Weedle in the face of him, Tom' which drives the ほ obtaining voice of the surprise from トム; It spat from the liquid which between the eye of s is thick, has stickiness. Weedle in the bush then that he was possible, directly scurried. " Wait! Don' Go of t! " When he went after Weedle, wiping the string, from that surface separated, you shot トム which was called simultaneously. After the reducing, he looks at Weedle for the second time, in the road stands in clear vision. トム moved to that one slowly. Your tail, " Concerning " Hey; You called トム quietly with voice of relief. Persuasive power the あ as for トム which lands the time like the Pokemon bee is large, suddenly touching insect Pokemon did in at those time. Being surprised, it supported トム, directed that Pokedex to creative ones. " Beedrill, poison bee Pokemon. The form which Weedle which follows to the stage of Kakuna makes develop. Attacks that anyone who enters into the territory or anyone it' It' which threatens the young person of s, thinks; It' of the forefoot of s; The stinger and sharp addition product of of the poisonous of s. In addition as for that when it is very positive, it is. Caution. " Approach; As for cool sweat Tom' It moved under the surface of s. トム quickly because of the number of enlargements of necessity for the new territory, inquired about the story concerning the crowd of Beedrill which attacks town. With that surface, you prepare Beedrill it floated in order to strike the time. " N- splendid Beedrill. B-Beedrill it is good... " You stutter weakly, support トム slowly. Weedle' The tail of s, " So you walk, really " I didn' The average of t; トム whispered being useless knows that Beedrill has not heard. Tom' The brain of s to think concerning moving with fear, excessively fozen it was. Beedrill prepares her damage, pulled in order to thrust トム which loads the arm of the needle where her razor is sharp. トム tightening, squeezes that eye which is locked and skewered expects at the time of all with the needle. It passed second. And 2 seconds. 3. There is no sting. トム to open that eye, another Pokemon Beedrill' It understood that attack of the rage of s is stopped. That was as that is the machine, thin the shade of pink of plane surface for most bodies of Pokemon of red. Then トム looked at the feet, panted. As for that the same gray which he made stumble was the blue stone. And, mystery Pokemon attack of tackle rushed forward with Beedrill which hits her. It was defeated, it scooped Beedrill which had become shame on Weedle where her needle she is young flew. トム, it controls and that paniced becomes tired and is obtained in that knee, sees you breathe, it turned to Pokemon and トム, said, " Pory-gon" The voice where blank is synthesized. トム directed that Pokedex to creative ones. " " of Porygon and in fact Pokemon; Tom' You called s Pokedex. " The Its body from the extreme computer cord/code has become complete. That downloads that itself in most machines, or the electronic equipment or or it is free to upload. As for that voice processor program language. " It can speak,; " Porygon? " As for トム Pokemon and " You' Re Porygon? " You asked; " Pory-gon several 0-2-7-2-1 edition 7 points 4. With other word, as for me 2 1000th, 7 hun dre Th, professional duce d. " 20 first it was Pory-gon; You walked トム to Porygon. Me, " of Porygon; " in order to help; Thanks; As for トム, Porygon' You appreciate for the thouhgtful inclusion of s, you said. " Than-k. My originator, in order to help as for me 胡person s. " It was drawn up; It spat Porygon blankly. As for トム Porygon' You saw with the amount of s. Beedrill' which was imbedded with that; There was quiet dent from the needle of s and that トム made stumble naturally there were feet which were dragged. " The glance of You was hurt rather Porygon. Me on the center of Pokemon of the town of Halla, permit the fact that it keeps accompanying exactly in the front? It' S me you. " The minimum which which can make for the sake of; As for Porygon you nodded. " Than-k you. " ****************** Asylum' The note of s: As for that.... It starts, - Asylum (Mewfour) the **********
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    Well that was pretty interesting. Made some sense here and there. Little confusing at times since it was all in one gaint paragraph. But again, interesting in the good yet strange way! I can only imagine what will come up next time.

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    Dude - PARAGRAPH IT!!! even if it was stuck in a translator. I can't even read that I'm not very talented, so go easy on me!

    Seriously, paragraph it and itll be better. I wanna compare it to the original too. I was a fanof the original you kno - just never bothered replying.



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    I'm getting a mental image of monkeys pounding on typewriters. Paragraphs would be nice. Better yet, take Pancake's suggestion and repost the original so we can compare the two. You insane person you.

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    chapter one: saibanechikku? lol this is insane. ^_^

    We are half-hearted creatures,
    Fooling about with drink and sex and ambition when infinite joy is offered us,

    Like an ignorant child who wants to go on making mud pies in a slum
    Because he cannot imagine what is meant by the offer of a holiday at the sea.

    We are far too easily pleased.

    C.S. Lewis ~ "The Weight of Glory"

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