Fanfic Reviewer Organisation - General Topic!

[Gavin Luper]

The Fanfiction Reviewer Organisation – General Topic.

G’day!

Well, Lord knows how long it’s taken to get this back up and running, but at last I’ve got around to it after a fairly significant prodding from various people. Welcome back to the new and improved Fanfiction Reviewer Organisation, the organisation that rates and reviews your fics as requested! As with the last version, the FFRO has been split into two different threads to allow everything to flow smoothly.

This topic is the General Topic - in here, you request for your fic to be reviewed by the raters (who have been announced in the Review Topic) and also any questions about the FFRO, or any queries or complaints go here.

As ever, credit for the original version goes to the esteemed Andy Newer.

What does belong here:

* Requests to have your fic reviewed.
* General questions about the FFRO.
* General comments, complaints, talk, etc.

What doesn't belong here (belongs in the Review Topic):

* Reviews by the raters.
* Questions about the rating process.

These can be found in the Rewiew Topic.

It should also be noted that, if a writer is dissatisfied with a review they have been given - for example, if it is inadequate or they think has been unfairly rated, perhaps due to bias on the reviewer's behalf - then they can ask for their fic to be re-reviewed by someone else. This would be best to be done by a simple request in this thread; otherwise, writers can of course PM a specific reviewer and request that they review their fic. Re-reviews will be processed in the same way as all other fics-to-be-reviewed - they will not be pushed back in the queue or pushed ahead.

Simple, eh? So, without any further ado (or procrastinating ^_^) I declare the FFRO open and active once again!

*explodes a party popper*

Hurrah!

OK then, any requests or questions, fire away guys! Requests will be compiled into lists regularly and then given to the raters.

Cheers!

[Hyperness is a Good Thing]

Yay! First reply!
I request for my fic, An Iapapa Berry - Lostelle's tale, to be reviewed! I would prefer it if the reviewer could state my fic's weaknesses so that I can improve on them.
The link is in my Sig. Thanks. =)

[Chris 2.1]

I would be very grateful if both my fanfics could be reviewed.

Monica's Vendetta
The Pokemon Masters League (A Tribute to ASB)

Please note with the latter, it is a fic based off the ASB League. So it's basically a Pokemon league. Characters are modelled off TPM members and such.

Thanks.

[Mega Horny]

I would like my fic, AFPF to be reviewed. It has a slow start, but has some great stuff planned for it and I would like to have another review later when I've completed more chapters. If you want, I can also PM you chapters 6 - 8, which are not yet posted in the thread.

[MeLoVeGhOsTs]

I'd like my Fic: Screams of pain to be reviewed, because I think it's n00bish, full of errors and so. I can work on the errors and stuff, but I wanna know what people think of the plot (as far as there is any in the first chapters) and all kinds of stuff. Thanks in advance.

- MLG

[Dragonfree]

I would like a review of The Quest for the Legends (link in my sig) from somebody with the patience to read 31 chapters. ^^; Just note that the beginning chapters are very bad and I'm already revising them again. (In fact, I may actually merge the new first chapters into the old version, at the risk of maybe having very slight inconsistencies with later chapters...)

[Samchu]

I would like to request a review of the join fic Kitt and Katt (I think it's on page 2 of the fanfiction forum). We've completed over thirty chapters and a constructive review would be really helpful as we are planning another joint venture once this one has finished.

Thank you

[classy_cat18]

I guess I would like someone to review Knights to Remember. mr_pikachu pointed out a few problems like description but I would like to see what someone else thinks about it. But wait...is there a problem with someone reviewing a sequel? If so, I could wait until my other fic is ready for reviewing.

[Plantae]

I would be honored if one of you would not mind reviewing The Maiden Fish.

If any of you are up to the challenge, also, Philosophic Pabulum. The difficulty is that it does not fit the "fanfiction" category, if having fantastical elements to it. But as it is, it is an essay in the lightest sense and basically one lengthy metaphor. For that reason, if it were to be reviewed, one might have to tweak a couple of the categories in the rating chart listed in the other topic.

[Gavin Luper]

Great to see people interested in this already!

Full Length Fics To-Be-Reviewed:
Monica's Vendetta, by Chris 2.0.
The Pokemon Masters League (A Tribute to ASB), by Chris 2.0.
A Fast-paced Fic, by Mega Horny.
Screams of Pain, by MeLoveGhosts.
The Quest for the Legends, by Dragonfree.
Kitt and Katt, by Samchu and eevee-shayna.
Knights to Remember, by classy_cat18.

Short Stories and other Short Fics To-Be-Reviewed:
The Maiden Fish, by Plantae.
Philosophic Pabulum, by Plantae.

Fics Currently Being Reviewed:
An Iapapa Berry ~ Lostelle's Tale, by Hyperness is a Good Thing. (I'm doing this one)

Cheers everyone, for supporting the new FFRO! And reviewers - begin reviewing!

[Saffire Persian]

Hmm - I'd like to request a review for my story, Metamorphosis, and I'd be grateful for whatever critique you could give me. It's not long, with only two chapters thus far.

If it's okay, I'd also like to request a review for my Short-story/One-shot Loyalty. I'd especially like to have critique on the ending twist so I can edit the story accordingly.

Thanks! ^_^

[darktyranitar]

I guess I should start reviewing...

I'll take on Scream Of Pain my MeLoveGhosts to be reviewed.

[MeLoVeGhOsTs]

Screams of pain And hey! Thanks =D Don't go easy on me.

[Gavin Luper]

Whee.

Full Length Fics To-Be-Reviewed:
Monica's Vendetta, by Chris 2.0.
The Pokemon Masters League (A Tribute to ASB), by Chris 2.0.
A Fast-paced Fic, by Mega Horny.
The Quest for the Legends, by Dragonfree.
Kitt and Katt, by Samchu and eevee-shayna.
Knights to Remember, by classy_cat18.
Metamorphosis, by Sapphire Persian.

Short Stories and other Short Fics To-Be-Reviewed:
The Maiden Fish, by Plantae.
Philosophic Pabulum, by Plantae.
Loyaltry, by Sapphire Persian.

Fics Currently Being Reviewed:
An Iapapa Berry ~ Lostelle's Tale, by Hyperness is a Good Thing. (Gavin Luper)
Screams of Pain, by MeLoveGhosts. (Darktyranitar)

Cheers!

[Mewfour]

I'll take Kitt and Katt.

Not that this is a cop-out or anything </inside joke>

[starjake]

I might as well jump on the bandwagon...

I would appreciate a review of Yu-Gi-Oh: Virtual Disaster, if anyone has the time.

[Blademaster]

I always wanted to check out The Pokemon Masters League, so I guess I'll read that.

[mr_pikachu]

Hmm... I've been meaning to check out Saffire Persian's Metamorphosis, so signing up for it will give me a good incentive to read. (Laziness is a powerful force, y'know.) I'll review that one.

[MeLoVeGhOsTs]

Waw thanks DT, I never imagined I would get a 6/10 for Spelling.

So far it's evolving slowly, my that is, but Matt seems to be the average Joe for now, but that will all change. Jack will have big part in this.

Remember it's always good to lead the readers somewhere else and snap them with a whole new ting.

I got 73/100, that's a pretty score if you ask me, atleast for someone who only has 2 and half years of english. Yes I'm an english n00b.

Again, thanks DT!

[Mega Horny]

I would appreciate it if somebody would read my fic. I think its pretty good and people say its funny...

[Dragonfree]

I think I'll have a go at Plantae's two shorties.

[Plantae]

My supreme thanks in advance, Dragonfree.

[darktyranitar]

So MLG has only 2 and half years of english?

Ah, that explained the spelling...

Hmm, I guess I could pick a fic to review... but my mind is not made up at this point.

[Hyperness is a Good Thing]

Welll.. heheh I would like to request for my songfic, Scarlet, to be reviewed. =) Thank you in advance to whoever reviews it.

http://www.pokemasters.net/forums/in...?topic=43956.0

[Mewfour]

I'll take Loyaltry for $400, Alex.

[Saffire Persian]

My thanks in advance to both of you - though to point out a typo, it's Loyalty, not Loyaltry as it was listed. XD No problem though.

[Gavin Luper]

OK, I'm still doing my review, I've finished the reading part though. As for all the others:

Full Length Fics To-Be-Reviewed:
Monica's Vendetta, by Chris 2.0.
The Pokemon Masters League (A Tribute to ASB), by Chris 2.0.
A Fast-paced Fic, by Mega Horny.
The Quest for the Legends, by Dragonfree.
Knights to Remember, by classy_cat18.
Metamorphosis, by Sapphire Persian.
Yu-Gi-Oh: Virtual Disaster, by Starjake.

Short Stories and other Short Fics To-Be-Reviewed:
Scarlet, by Hyperness is a Good Thing. (NB: One-shot Songfic.)

Fics Currently Being Reviewed:
An Iapapa Berry ~ Lostelle's Tale, by Hyperness is a Good Thing. (Gavin Luper)
Metamorphosis, by Sapphire Persian. (mr_pikachu)
Philosophic Pabulum, by Plantae. (Dragonfree)
Loyalty, by Sapphire Persian. (Evil Mewf0ur)

Cheers!

[Mewfour]

You know, I'm dead sorry I haven't even gotten around to looking at Loyalty yet- some numb-nut punk at work today just up and quit a few days ago, so guess who's working 6 am to 8 pm every day? Lucky me. Hopefully I'll have it reviewed by Saturday.

[Saffire Persian]

I don't mind at all. ^_^ I'm just happy for whatever reviews I get. ^_^ Thanks for taking time out of your schedule to do it, though.

[mr_pikachu]

The Metamorphosis review has been completed.

Let's see, here... I guess I'll take Mega Horny's A Fast-Paced Fic next.


(Oh, and you can also scratch Metamorphosis off the "Fics-To-Be-Reviewed" section... I'm not sure why it's listed there, as well.)

[Saffire Persian]

Dunno where else to say it, but thanks for taking the time to review, mr_pikachu!

[mr_pikachu]

Hey, it's my pleasure. That's why I do this.

[Blademaster]

Hey, Gavin, m'man - you can remove The Pokemon Masters League from the 'to-be-reviewed' section, too - I did that already, just a few days ago...

[mistysakura]

So I thought as I have a three-day break, I'd pull my weight in FFRO for a change. (I suppose it's better than saying I'll review something, then leaving it for a month because I don't have free time. That happened once.) Well anyway, I'll take The Quest for the Legends. Always wanted to read it. (By the way, Dragonfree, the link in your sig doesn't work, you might want to fix it.)

[Gavin Luper]

Alright - thanks to work and life and planning my trip, I've seriously had very little time to do ANYTHING for the last month or two, so I've been barely scraping enough time to patrol the forum enough to keep things maintained, let alone actually do my review or make progress with my writing. To Hyperness - I will get your review done some time in the next month, I promise. It's just a matter of making enough time.

In any case, here's the revised Review List. Have fun, people!

Full Length Fics To-Be-Reviewed:
Monica's Vendetta, by Chris 2.0.
The Pokemon Masters League (A Tribute to ASB), by Chris 2.0.
Knights to Remember, by classy_cat18.
Yu-Gi-Oh: Virtual Disaster, by Starjake.

Short Stories and other Short Fics To-Be-Reviewed:
Scarlet, by Hyperness is a Good Thing. (NB: One-shot Songfic.)

Fics Currently Being Reviewed:
An Iapapa Berry ~ Lostelle's Tale, by Hyperness is a Good Thing. (Gavin Luper)
Philosophic Pabulum, by Plantae. (Dragonfree)
Loyalty, by Sapphire Persian. (Evil Mewf0ur)
A Fast-paced Fic, by Mega Horny. (mr_pikachu)
The Quest for the Legends, by Dragonfree. (mistysakura)

Cheers!

[Plantae]

I would like to request the review of the second half of The Maiden (Fish) which can be found here. Not that I was not satisfied with my first (thanks again Dragonfree), but for purposes of second opinion, I would like it to be a person other than her.

[Mewfour]

Yes, I am still alive. I've quit my shitty job (finally!) so while I hunt for a new, less bull-crappy one, I'll finally have some time to review Loyalty. Or Loyaltry, whatever.

[Hyperness is a Good Thing]

To Gavin Luper: It's ok, take your time. ^^ It's not that urgent a thing.

[Mega Horny]

pfeh, sorry for the late arrival but thanks much mt. p! Thanks for taking the time to review and I hope you enjoy ^^.

[Plantae]

I would like to request a review of another short story, Avoid Water. That is, if reviews are still being had. Thanks in advance to whoever takes up the challenge of my dense prose style.