Wow... what an intense chapter...

This was great, I could see everything in my head as you went along. You said a woman with red hair was talking to a man... oh jeez, does that mean the ditzy duo of J & J are involved? lol...

I hope Marina's ok. I mean, she was a great character. For her to be killed by TR after she was the one who warned Lisa would just be so terrible... oh, right, Lisa. Yeah, I hope she's okay, too.

Anyway, nice setup for the crossover! I did catch one or two spelling mistakes, but it's no big deal, especially since it's a rarity for you. Besides, they were just typos. I know you know how to spell better than that!

Well, I can't wait for the next chapter! Hopefully when the c/o comes it'll be just as intense as this was!