...Gavin was gone?Originally Posted by Gavin Luper
OK, let's see here...
Well, that was... interesting...
So, Mt. Fairfax is Entei's home? And the Union was looking for Entei?
...No, wait-Entei and the Union were on the same side, so...
Ugh, my attention span sucks...
In any case, it was a well-detailed chapter; part of me was actually hoping Veronica would get BBQ-ed, but then again, that's just me and my 'weird sense of humor...'
I was curious about that blob-thing, too. What was it, a cocoon? Or some sort of a vessel?
...Wait, a cocoon IS tecnically a vessel...
Sigh...
I honestly don't see what you were so apprehensive about, Gavin-Lisa's been through worse than this chapter.
Still, if it's the beginning of something, then I guess you'd know better than me...
And yes, this chapter was kinda long, but it was action-packed, so I didn't really notice. I honestly thought it'd be a lot longer; when I read that last line:
"And then, at long last, she collapsed from exhaustion."
I looked and saw your sig; I was like, "What? That's it?"
In any case, it seems like you're gonna end Book 2 with a bang, so don't keep us in suspense too long.
...That's Dark Sage's job. :smilie:
-Blademaster, the Dark Scorpion Duelist