Louis: Hello and welcome to LTL, and can I just say, thank you so much for replying to this thread! It means a lot to get new feedback and especially from someone new to the fic, too. And hey - you're officially a reader now, hoorah!
Ah, another member of a big family, I see! Yes, this was coming partly from personal experience - I'm number 5 of 6 kids - so I was partly referring to a younger sibling and, I think, partly referring to myself who probably used to irritate my older siblings in that way! Haha shame on me.
I admit I had to go reread this to see what you meant, because out of context it looks extremely sarcastic! But nope, that was Lisa being pragmatic and deciding that even though things looked maybe a bit spooky, when you break it down to each individual thing, it's not actually scary at all.This part made me laugh. I don't know if it was meant to be sarcastic, but if it was, it was nicely done too. Also, it was a very accurate description of a burned lace and of course, of the brass tower we loved so much from GSC where the three legendary dogs awaited.
This is how out of touch I am haha - I didn't even know Bounce was an attack. But nope, it was just Suicune bounding away....when I finished reading this, for some reason, I thought of the following: "Suicune - Bounce attack". I know, its a crazy thought, and a really random one (since Suicune doesn't learn Bounce), but that's honestly what came to mind.
Good question, mate. You will see shortly once you keep reading.Apart from this, I have to say that this is a nice cliffhanger, since it leaves the reader with the question: Could Lisa and Aimom resist the blinding speed of Suicune when it jumped one floor and rushed outside the building? Is she still holding on to Suicune's fur?
Thanks again for reading and replying, dude - I appreciate it so much (I say this all the time to the point where it must sound insincere by now, but hell, I do, it's the truth).
New chapter is right around the corner ...
No, seriously. Will be up in about 1 week - I'm thinking two weeks between chapters works for people without anyone falling too far behind?