I'm very amazed. Teaches me to alwasy read this. That Weedle comeback was unpredicted by my half. It would be so good if weedles were really like that. ^_^ But they're not so we just have to make it up . Also the last bit with the folders and backstabbing was actually very dark and mysterious... bum ba bum... ^_^

But it was an excellent chapter i seriously reckon u write really good battle scenes cuz lyk, that was really good. I could just SEE it happening as I read. It takes a thousand words to paint a picture, in your case, six thousand.

~Mist