FINALLY have enough breathing time to read this.

Ok. Totally loved it. Nothing happened until the very end of the chapter, which brought a silent suspense over my heart. I was pounding as she ran through what seemed like safe streets. It was maginificently written. Her character has formed to be somewhat paranoid, which suits the situation fine. I think its more than necessary for her to be paranoid.

I'm not so sure about the ending though. I feel like what you've done for the last few chapters is had this suspenceful beginning, then a big event and then a quick end to the chapter. Perhaps the battle at the colosseum could have been drawn out more, perhaps more could have happened... i just felt like it ended too suddenly.

moar moar moar plox