Well, it only took me...two days or so to read the whole thing...thank mr. pikachu...

I really must congratulate you on your writing, and your loyalty to the fic. This has obviously been many years in the making, but you've stuck with it!

One minor thing from WAAAAAAAAAAY back in the beginning of the story; is Lisa Walters the name of the girl Ash meets in the Entei pokemon movie? I can't remember, but if it is...talk about giving life to a minor character!

I can't wait to see the next chapter and the third (and, I assume, final) leg of this journey! While I certainly can't complain about not posting chapters frequently enough...post the next sooner as opposed to later!