Another great chapter. Great descriptions, invigorating dialogue, nice little cliffhanger at the end, what else can I say? My only qualm seems to be that I don’t want Lisa to commit too many evil or accidentally evil acts before the end, but then that would make her perfect, so that story wouldn’t be fun. Also, Jamie's getting pretty interesting, and I think you did pretty well with the difference between when he's high and when he's not, It'll be interesting to see whether or not we ever see him again. I think you’re finding the right balance right now so that’s all I’m gonna say.

On another note, I have absolutely no clue what the island of lost souls is, unless it’s some reference to a piece of classic literature. I also think the lead-in is a good idea, because if you have long times in between chapters, it’s easier to remember what happened.

Looking forward to more LTL chapters and to reading the nightmare story. See ya later.