Right - it was confusing. But confusing is good.

It started off nicely, nice and light, just like the first chapter of part III should be. And then it moved into the depths of confusion. The best thing abuot confusion in this story si that it's gonna keep people wanting the answers, and will probably also give you somewhere to write. I personally liked it, didn't understand the bit with Lance very much - but that's just me being weird. My fav bit would've had to be the bit where Marina and them were just hanging out, in a fic filled with action as much as this - you really do need some simple character building scenes.