So that's what was waiting in Lisa's house. Although... If she had been there so long before realizing that there were popele in here house, had they not know she was there? (As Lisa said, she was singing and such.) Either way, the fact that she was in her own house for so long along with such danger is very creepy. You did a great job giving this chapter a spooky, impending danger sort of feel. Well, until the end, as then the danger is no longer impending...

I wonder if Marina is dead... She was pretty beat up. But I have a feeling she might be just unconsious... However that might just be wishful thinking. In a way that line could have implied death. *goes back and checks the scene for a third time* Hmmm...

Well, I could really feel the tension in this chapter. Also, a strong blow has been dealt to Lisa, being that now her whole family is in danger as long as she stays with them. (or possibly even without that) Although now it seems she has a bigger problem to worry about.

I'll be waiting for the next chapter. Keep it up!