Wow, this has got to be one of my favourite chapters ever. But the Bouncy Furret will always be the fav.

Well how choc full of excitement, nice to see some more Buzzball explanation, and a letter eh! Spiffy.

An urgent problem at work, I hope that Jean and Wes and Co are Ok. Hopefully not captured. Lisa can't go to Tom's either, it'd be another trap. I'm surprised they didn't find her earlier, go to all the Walters houses and go all Terminator. Lisa Walters *Bam*

But GAH! Lisa's HOUSE! POOR HOUSE! Oh yeah... and Marina.

Marina was killed! And did she send out her Mudkip.. but Marina was killed! She took an electric toothbrush to the chest... took me two times to pick up on it....... but now she's dead...

But oh god, I'm really worried for Lisa now... I really am, and poor Marina is gone....

Excellent writing, you really drew me in and I've become emotionally attached to these characters... Poor Marina... a secondary character I genuinely liked.... I wonder what happens now.