huzzah huzzah!

Apologies for the late reply! But better than never!

OOh, Motor Inn! CLASSY! Mosquitos and caravans. The room reminded me of the place in Identity... Creepy. Its nice to see they don't go 5 star the entire time.

I absolutely hate that owner, he's a money grubbing creep! NEVER TRUST DWARVES! Lisa seeing herself on TV, I was expecting her to say - OH MY GOD! THE CAMERA PUTS ON 10 KILOS!

Lisa's little outburst, awww, its nice, but you can tell she's getting tired and emotional! Poor Gavin.

I was amused that Lisa's second person to cry for help was the midget. I was surprised Gavin didn't wake up or something... I was also amused Lisa doesn't sleep with a Pokemon on guard at all times after all the trouble she's been in lately... although she was tired and emotional...

Ellie was amusingly chatty. However, that didn't work out for poor Rachel.

My only thought as to who that man was, was perhaps a traitor of the Asso. Or Lunanine or Sucine in a human form perhaps. But they were nice and helpful, if not mysticly cryptic... Oh well! Small doses!

Good chapter ^5

Edit: Don't worry gavin! I can ban him for you!