Lisa the Legend: Chapter 82 - Last Night on Earth now up! (24th June 2013)

[mistysakura]

But, despite the way people have responded to chapter 61, I'm still sure it was all necessary, but I suppose that's because, as the writer, I have a different perspective on the story to the readers.

I'm not doubting that everything was necessary. I agree that Lisa had to let all this stuff out before she reenters the world and the war. It's just that I thought the transition was icky, as you said, lost in all the spider and Emma stuff.

[Gavin Luper]

I'm not doubting that everything was necessary. I agree that Lisa had to let all this stuff out before she reenters the world and the war. It's just that I thought the transition was icky, as you said, lost in all the spider and Emma stuff.

Well said. ^_^ Quite seriously. I'd like to blame the icky transition on the big gap between chapters, but I unfortunately have to accept it had more to do with my own ineptness and the fact that, in Chapter 60, I didn't quite know what I was going to do with Lisa's emotions. It would've been a lot cleverer of me to do this big planning phase BEFORE I started Book III ... better late than never I suppose. I'm just going to redouble my efforts to make the next chapters brilliant.